Very pretty! 可是通常Invitation上會寫Welcome to our wedding嗎? 不是會說...You are invited to our wedding.... 還有應該是 "received Christ" 沒有 "the" 還有"..mailing address for THE official invitation..."
ahh...I didn't mean for the THE to be in capital letters, just wanted to point out that there should a "the". Also, it's kind of strange to capitalize the first letter of each word. Either just capitalized the beginning of the sentence, or capitalize all the letters. Just a suggestion though. =P
Very pretty!
回覆刪除可是通常Invitation上會寫Welcome to our wedding嗎? 不是會說...You are invited to our wedding....
還有應該是 "received Christ" 沒有 "the"
還有"..mailing address for THE official invitation..."
thanks, just corrected it... :P
回覆刪除ahh...I didn't mean for the THE to be in capital letters, just wanted to point out that there should a "the". Also, it's kind of strange to capitalize the first letter of each word. Either just capitalized the beginning of the sentence, or capitalize all the letters. Just a suggestion though. =P
回覆刪除modified as recommended. add a liittle something on the 2nd page, too
回覆刪除"please let us know"
回覆刪除the L is still capitalized...
my advisor "advised" me to take the line of "gift of money" out... :-P (but she gets the idea that we don't want a lot of gifts of 1 Corinthians 13)
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